brightens my heart

• Artist: Xstylish ninjaX
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• Date: 05/09/2009
• Tags: brightens heart

heart breeze skipping over water, heart
heart water reflecting lights strung over the bridge, heart
heart lights shining in your eyes. heart

heart the fresh,bold feeling of something new, heart
heart as winter melts into liquid spring, heart
heart and summer takes shape and ripens alongside love. heart

heart the petals from flowering trees,snow for the summer, heart
heart floating down around us as we kiss, heart
heart once, twice, then forever. heart

heart you aren't just my sunshine. heart

heart your my sun. heart

Comments

[darex123]

cool 5/5

[-juicy condamn-]

Pwetty Good!!! Kind've Cute lOl

[Shadowed Angel of Night]

it's very good

[Fires_Lost_Prey]

You have a wonderful voice in your poetry <3
Don't lose that voice & you might go far one day :]

[Discombobulated Me]

Cute =3

[Fated Rapture]

oh wow you captured a lot of emotions in this poem of yours. It's really good, though I'd remove some of the hearts X3 Good imagery in the words. :3

[xX-xxxholicxxx-Xx]

Id say it is pretty good i give it a 4 b/c it's not my favortite!
Good job!