screaming

• Artist: Xvenomous_roseX
• Description: i was bored the ending doesnt make any sense though
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: garden

screaming inside
quiet on the out

i want to scream and shout
but all i can do is pout

this world is cruel
and i always look like a fool

but one day i will be free

Comments

[Xvenomous_roseX]

yeah i know i just felt like makin it ryhme idk y.....

[Rainbow cat FACE]

you shouldnt force things to rhyme. when its forced, its really obvious, and usually sounds cliche because the author doesnt want to take the time to figure out a good rhyme scheme and meter.
and poems dont *have* to rhyme.