Little Poem :P

• Artist: woozily
• Description: Just a homework for the english lesson...pls keep in mind that i´m from germany^^
  so don´t woder if there are loooots of mistakes...
• Date: 05/02/2009
• Tags: poem

One gloomy day, a loney one
Just came something that had to come
Nothing was like it used to be
Not even I seem to be me
But What happend, I forgot
And you don´t want to tell me what
How it started I don´t know
So let´s forget this stupid show
There are no more tears to shed
So it´s ought to be forget

Comments

[Miku~Noaru]

I will be WAY nicer. I think there's a little bit of confusion with the tenses of some of the words, which is why they seem like they rhyme? But outside of that this is giving me Alice in the Looking Glass like oh my gosh, where am I? There's a caterpillar, he has a hookah, what's that about? Idk, maybe we should just forget about it, y'know? I wonder if you are more fluent in English or if you've decided to not be fluent in English. Honestly, English is a shitty language, I commend you. . 3/5.

[death jr the first]

is just wonderful 5/5

[janek p swiatek]

i like it
good job

[Leonwifey510]

aww this so sad and just the little words can express all that