7:57 to your soul

• Artist: applesauce262
• Description: just about my writing,( i spelled gurl wrong cuz my computer wont let me spell it with an 'i')
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: your soul writing zero messenger

Pencil to paper
writing in mind
don't worry kid
time to unwind

tell your poems, your stories, your tragic little tales
take out your hammer
and drive the nail

through your skull to the tissue
revel you thoughts and soul
reach inside to find the issue
though all your hopeless goals

You find that not all
things should be free
with life and love
you pay a toll fee

They take your heart,
your bain,
and put one gurl in reign

of your life
and of your writing
soon you'll stop fighting

Because she has the toll
so shes the new goal.

Comments

[ree-ree_bear]

Out of all your poems i dont know why, but i like this poem a lot compared to the rest you've submitted. I like the twist to how your first starting it off as a person whom commonly writes poems, then take it too how a girl or "gurl" lol, Hey maybe you should write a poem about other subject, instead of writing about that "gurl" i mean i know she's important, but i wanna see something.
off to your next poem lol