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Dose he love me.
proably not
I think he left me.
we haven't talked for days.
when i call it goes straight to voice mail.
and he never calls me to say he loves me.
what could he being doing?
if he answer what would i say?
i going over there!
im on my way.
he asks what are you doing here baby
i reply to see you
you haven't called!
or answered your phone
i have a good reason belive me he says
i don't want to hear it I scream
just meet me tomarrow
at the bay
ok
i walk ,thinking
what if he is breaking up with me.
ill spare my self and not go
he calls baby where are you at.
im at home
i knew i could not stand the pain
what pain? he asked
Of a heart break i said
no no i would never i need you to come please
i reach the bay
there he is
candles and all
he bends on one knee
baby will you marry me
i cry
yes
but why were you putting me off
i had to work over to pay for the ring
i could have had enough to do it
in a mouth or two
but i could wait
to spend the rest of my life with you
heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart heart
- by sammynoodle |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/29/2009 |
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- Title: Dose he love me
- Artist: sammynoodle
- Description: it sloppy and its free verse but i was busty so yeah let me now what you think
- Date: 04/29/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- meimihaneoka69962 - 05/03/2009
- it's sooooo cute!!!! the spelling kind of ruins the effect, though. 4/5.
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 04/29/2009
- It's awesome :] Did this really happen?
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