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The part of me I miss the most,
is my peaceful, loving heart.
The one that always trusted you,
even when we were apart.
I'm a little older now.
The world is not what it seems.
My heart no longer pounds for you,
And it makes it hard to breath.
All moments when I look at you,
Inside, I scream your name.
You walk right past me everyday,
Not even glancing my way.
I wonder what I've done so wrong,
To make you hate me so.
So I'll wipe away the fresh, new tears.
And fake another smile.
Until the day when you will see,
I still love you.
And I know you love me too.

- Title: I Still Love You
- Artist: Cary09
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Description:
Just something I came up with a couple of years ago. I didn't finish it until recently. I hope you enjoy.
Constructive criticism is welcome. - Date: 04/27/2009
- Tags: still love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- AmaniPhoebe - 08/10/2009
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its good
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- Cary09 - 05/10/2009
- Does anyone else have any advice for me?
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- Mikey Mouse09 - 05/08/2009
- This still needs some work, but I like it.
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- Kalan the Lost - 05/05/2009
- Wow! This is REALLY good! Great job Hunnie!
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- Cary09 - 04/30/2009
- If there is anything I can improve on, please tell me.
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