By My Blade

• Artist: xenthes4
• Description:
• Date: 04/23/2009
• Tags: blade

Take word by my blade,
I will not let you fade,
You may hide in the shade,
Yet my love for you will not Trade.


Alas my Darling,
Do not cry out as a Starling,
I will be with You in the Raid,
You will be by my blade.

Comments

[Homicidalkat]

Don't restrict yourself to words that rhyme, unless that's what you're aiming for. If you are going to rhyme, use different words instead of repeating the same ones.

[Deadlylight6]

kinda constricting urself w forced rhyme. poetry is all bout rhyming. its not as necessary as most ppl think. just let ur words flow next time