vampire's depression

• Artist: Vampire_Meo1908
• Description: i dont freaking know
• Date: 04/23/2009
• Tags: vampires depression

you wander alone
alone in the dark
cant find a phone
no sound not even a bark

your taken by the darkness
theres a pain in your neck
what just happened?
you've lost mortal life

you thirst for blood
your alone in the world now
your no longer needed
your going to hell

noone loves you
what will you do?
but fineally when you love comes
your happy with them

untill your thirst over powers you
an you love is killed
your compleatly alone
forever

Comments

[Fantazz Randomness]

The message came through, i can say that much. Feeling a bit depress-ed, that morning, yes? i know how you feel. However, i don't agree that the pic fits.
Make sure you edit the work before submission - there were a few punctuation and spelling errors. Other than that, great job!

[The Sixth L]

Poor spelling, grammar, punctuation + boring description + bland poem + random unfitting Touhou image (don't just take random pictures from Google, mmkay?) = 1/5

[CherryLips08]

I agree with the person who post their comment on 4/23/2009.

[The AntiSocial Butterfly]

who cares? its pretty good smile

[NebuChi3]

I'm sorry but, you didn't capitalize letters, you didn't put any punctuation marks, and you made some spelling mistakes.

Those turned me off.