Beautiful nightmare

• Artist: xXxX_Toxic_death_XxXx
• Description: You see me.
  You can't speak.
  The beauty.
  Takes your voice.
  The eyes.
  Take your heart.
  The voice.
  Takes your breath away.
  The sent.
  Takes over your mind.
  Could this be your true love?
  You can't help but love them.
  Your Beautiful Nightmare
• Date: 04/23/2009
• Tags: beautiful nightmare

biggrin my first time putting my poems in and this is an older one i love hope you like please comment and let me know how you like it thanks so much ^_^

Comments

[Artemis Eryxion]

I like it. It really makes you think. Next time lovie, try switching the poem and the description, thats one thing that caught my eye when I found myself on this page, Lol. Was that the eye catcher xDD? None-the-less, 5/5

[Wet_Finger]

good

[II Weapon XI II]

i like it...especially wen it says "you cant speak, the beauty, takes ur voice"!!!!

[iMisty-Kun]

...hmmmm interesting...it flow ok but you could make it better hmmmm and it wasa a bite short but i liked it =3