What is love?

• Artist: nylasaur
• Description: Please leave only constructive criticism. All comments are appreciated, but please don't hate.
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: love

Love can be confusing
Some say it isn't real
But, my friends, when love comes
Face the challenge with zeal

Love is more than a kiss
Love is more than just lust
Love is who you will miss
And who makes all just

A love will make you laugh
A love will make you cry
When they leave they'll take half
Of your heart, and you'll "die"

If ever your love leaves
Your life will seem blacker
And the pain will just cleave
A sore hole in your soul

But love is all worth it
The pain must be edured
One can't be allowed to quit
Love is real, but not sure

Comments

[Lieutenant Post Office]

Grr. I'm still giving you a 5, cause you're my bestie, but this poem tears me apart from the inside. Still, it's your belief, so I don't mind. wink

[Baby Treasure]

you don't need any criticism your good as it is. I love his poem.

[Shiawase-hime]

This is beautiful! Great job

[xxtay-manxx]

i'm not into poetry at all, but this is great =D

[evie22]

WOW ITS TRUE TOO 5/5