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as the day moves on,
the air gets thin
the clouds move in
bringing a storm along
it will blow and light
as the cars try to fight
in the city streets
theyll be beat
soon it will start to flood
as the streets fill with mud
in the distance the sounds
of screaming goes around
it all happens
it all goes wrong
it all comes with
the coming of the storm.
- Title: the coming of the storm
- Artist: pixieNova
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- Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: coming storm
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Mc muffiner - 07/31/2009
- i really enjoyed this, even though i thought i wouldnt. somehow, you made me picture it all, in a not so wonderful word choice, so good job. your writing is surprising.
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- scitama - 04/19/2009
- I enjoyed your rhyming smile And I pictured the destruction too!
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