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no matter how i try we die
not the death visible to the naked eye but
when i am naked with you
your breath makes me high so i dont feel you biting down hard
my nipples raw
i try to keep you going but it is like you just dont want to be here
no matter what i do
try to undestand why i say goodbye we never
see eachother but never without sex
i need a real man or two or three i just dont need you
so why do you wither? i tell you, why?
you are ashamed that your best freind was how we met i dated him and you rescued me now you are guilty
ok so maby it was that you never say my name but you sure say my MOM'S
wtf
wtf
wtf
wtf
wtf
i dont get you i gave you EVERYTHING i had and MORE
you just make me feel hollow and empty
sorry doesnt work
back off
i need space
(to be contined)
- by lil_hell_raiser_007 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/15/2009 |
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- Title: Withering Away
- Artist: lil_hell_raiser_007
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Description:
just a little ode to my ex sry a*****e i hate you
edired for peole that wnated it done - Date: 04/15/2009
- Tags: withering away
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- Current_User - 04/16/2009
- Although the thought is good the execution needs work. The rhythm is not working in this poem. You should divide your thoughts differently do create a better flow. Also check the grammar and spelling there are a lot of mistakes.
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