Heaven or hell?

• Artist: PizzaToGo
• Description: It makes me sad to be alone
• Date: 04/14/2009
• Tags: hearts last words

If you have made it to my heart.
you will find it ripped apart.

My heart is full of darkness and death.
I'm wondering if this is my last breath.

I'm siting here, I feel so alone.
I'm waiting for someone to take me home.

I'm looking for someone to give me some light.
In this darkness that I must fight.

Will it happen? will I be saved?
Will I get this love I crave?

Will someone help me be this brave?
Or will I go straight to my grave?

Well I only have one last task
It's just something I have to ask

Just one question before I say farewell
Will I go to heaven? or down to hell?

Comments

[PizzaToGo]

Um... Yeah It came to me when I was making that weird thing... Thanks

[Zorcha]

I have one question~
Did that 'Reference Image'...like, give the idea to right that poem or was it just you were sad to be alone?
Anyway, loved your poem.

[Zjezjevoo]

o vr dep cuz zo drk lyk u comit susid i lyk op u don thu 5 inum fan

[Kaira Angel]

it shows how you really feal i like it!

[PizzaToGo]

Thanks

[official Outcast]

This really grabs peoples attention.
As soon as I started to read, I was pulled in with anticipation.
;]
Great, great job.