- You run, but you can't. There is no one. The light turns to darkness and warmth turns to cold. You try to scream, but you can't. There is no one. You feel death approaching, but it never comes. There is no one. You still try, pushing harder against the ground with your legs. Franticly trying to escape, but you can't. There is no one. So you sit and wait in the silence of your madness.
- by haleystarrizz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: Watch
- Artist: haleystarrizz
- Description: I think on a different level subconsciously and this is one of my dreams I have had.
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: watch
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CoffinCorvid - 04/22/2020
- I personally thought this is really good, however I'd like to add some constructive criticism, first of all, you used "but you can't" twice, only 3 sentences afterwards. it felt a bit repetitive, I also suggest grammar checking before you enter a contest, because you spelt frantically "franticly". Other than that, this is great!! Good job!!! smile
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