Meteor Shower

• Artist: ashtastetherainbow
• Description: One big metaphor. Lol.
• Date: 04/12/2009
• Tags: meteor shower

Cloaked in a blanket of clandestine sky,
the stars are like spiders
and the planes are like flies.
They spin and they spin
and they shine and they shine-
gleaming and scheming all throughout time.
The fly is devoured.
The plane disappears.
Then the stars hiccup-
a shower of tears.
And then the plane falls in a blanket of flames.
The meteor shower has gone and has came.

Comments

[Softball Gurlz]

very nice. lov'n it.

[Agent Bliss]

Wow. That's fantastic. It has really good rythm, so I'd say 5/5.

(please rate my stuff as well)

[hgfktdtvyrknyubrubtfnm]

i kinda liked it. decent. you get a four.

[miss_little_lonely]

is this a metaphor?
..well done.