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Look at me
Me, with an expression undecipherable
With eyes not a single colour, but myriad shades of grey
I walk, and the confused world below convulses with distrust
I talk, and the words compose themselves into a harmony of paradoxes
A mere facade: half concealing, half revealing
But you don’t even know what to look for
So you look up; look past the clouds, beyond the sky,
Only to find an emptiness devoid of the answers you seek
Ensnared into a reverie in which your anguished tears will never be kissed dry,
You question every birth, every death and every intake of breath in between
Locked in a destined embrace with your one true love, your hearts intertwine,
Yet I settle in the infinitesimal gap between your merged souls
Will the sobbing voices of trepidation in your head ever cease to haunt you?
You can’t see me; you don’t know me; you never will
Without a shadow of a doubt
heart
- by Panic Pirate |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2009 |
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- Title: Doubt
- Artist: Panic Pirate
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Description:
This was a school poetry assignment (Title: "Doubt" Length: 16 lines)
My best friend liked it a lot (and she's totally the kind of person that would tell me if it was crap!)
so I thought I may as well post it up here :)
Thanks for any *fingers crossed* feedback! - Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: doubt love reverie anguish life
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Panic Pirate - 06/17/2009
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Thanks Asthenia smile
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- x-Asthenia-x - 06/17/2009
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That is one AMAZING poem :O
It means something new to me everytime I look at it. I showed it to some friends and they agree: you're super, super talented smile - Report As Spam
- Panic Pirate - 04/21/2009
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Thanks again for the feedback!
Um, no klayuh, I haven't been cheated on but I've never seen it in that way before, it's interesting!
I have found love and when I'm with him... words can't describe how I feel, and I know he loves me too. But what I 'doubt' is how long we're going to be together considering he lives 3460 miles away or whether or not this is just a teen infatuation or if I'm just in love with the idea of being in love....
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- Xx_DR3AMI3_B0IxX - 04/14/2009
- lol i wuz readng this for about the tenth time and now i think i know what it means: that like somebody stole your boyfriend or someone you loved or they cheated on you and the other person never knew they were cheating and thats why they dont know you and never will and your wondering if the person that cheated is being haunted about what they did. lol probally not what it really is but it could be
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- erin says rawr - 04/14/2009
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Wow, this is really good.
Honestly, like I said before, the language is just amazing!
I agree with Sunafire, you are very talented! biggrin - Report As Spam
- Behatzlacha-S - 04/14/2009
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I lied. I like it. But by the time you've read this, it's to late to question me.
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- Panic Pirate - 04/12/2009
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Thanks Sunafire! *blushes*
That's what my best friend said too. biggrin
It's the beginning bit that most people don't get: it's Doubt personnified.
Thanks again!
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