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Why??
What happened??
At first it was all good...
Then it was all gone...
Rejection, isolation, humiliation,
The list goes on and on,
Why would you do this to me??
What have I ever done for you??
You've changed...
You're not the man I met those many years ago,
Did I do something wrong??
God why?!
Why does this always happen to me?!
You've made me insane,
I care for no one now,
And I have a jet-black heart...
And I blame it all on you...
So I ask once again...
Why??
- by Evanescence_Sasuke-luver |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Title: Why??
- Artist: Evanescence_Sasuke-luver
- Description: Kay a free write has NO RHYME to it and tells a story, plz my first time in this part of the arena so constructive critisizm :D hope you like it!
- Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: write
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Comments (5 Comments)
- this username is invalid - 01/14/2010
- It was good. But I would avoid the double question marks.
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- Evanescence_Sasuke-luver - 04/14/2009
- ty xd
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- rostrotten - 04/12/2009
- Awesomeness.
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- darkdeath383 - 04/10/2009
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i liked it really deep and meaningful
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- Evanescence_Sasuke-luver - 04/10/2009
- plz... don't judge me too hard... my first time and i wuz venting my irritation so it might not be the best that it could be... sweatdrop heheh... plz dosen't need a rhyme sceme either cuz its a free write... ;D ill stop tlking now
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