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You were my everything.
tonight im blinded by you,
and now thses breakup songs,
they really make sense.
true love, i haven't got a clue yet,
not after what happen.
im beautiful inside, not outside,
at least you could've try.
now im in 2nd place by you,
getting a second chance.
- by amen phath |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/09/2009 |
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- Title: true love ? of course not
- Artist: amen phath
- Description: my writing is not good, but im just trying to express feelings through a heartbroken heart. please rate, it dont really matter how low you rate but at least you did something. ^.^ yea, yea, blah blah my writing really sucks. lol
- Date: 04/09/2009
- Tags: true love course
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- Flamestorm06 - 04/13/2009
- you should take out the number, it generally ruins the flow of a poem to put in numbers
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