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You were my mentor
my life-long friend
time caught up
and brought the end
You tried to erase
my greatest fear
but it wasn't fair
to keep you here
You weren't really
mine to keep
I stayed with you
and watched you sleep
You sprouted wings
took to the sky
I caught a feather
and said goodbye
Those were my words
but even so
I will never
let you go

- Title: Goodbye
- Artist: kannair
- Description: read and comment on my poetry
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Trusae - 07/06/2009
- that was really amazing
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- dei-dei_itachi_tobi - 04/11/2009
- loved it
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- Kikyo Demon of Fire - 04/10/2009
- *wipes tear from face* thats really good, even i'm not that deep in my writing!
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