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"See that boy? Standing there!
The one with brown and messy hair?
The boy with jeans and shirt in blue?
The one with worn and frayed clothes too?
The one who hardly has a tan!"
"No, I see a different man
I see hair with life that shows
Hair that waves while the wind blows.
I see clothes with colors dim
because of where they've gone with him.
I also see eyes, of faded blue
Like clear skies only summers knew"
"How do you see these things in him!?"
"I took the time to look again"
- Title: Look Again
- Artist: Drinan
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Description:
Wrote this a time and a half ago. As you can guess, the person described by the two speakers is/was me. We all have that feeling that people just don't look past the first glimpse. They never bother to see what lies beneath the surface, and how it drives us crazy. Then we turn around, and in our frustration, do the same to others.
Anyway, this is brought to you by the closet-poet Drinan(me*bows*). Love it, Loathe it. Stash it or Trash it. But lemme know what you think! - Date: 04/06/2009
- Tags: look again take drinan
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Comments (4 Comments)
- HHH4ever96 - 04/13/2009
- always.
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- Jimbob Not Home - 04/08/2009
- I've been there, too. I always enjoy the point-counterpoint style. I Like it. 5
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- kii-chan-reloaded - 04/07/2009
- Very nice. Kudos.
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- Azzadar - 04/06/2009
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It's cute.
At school, I would be the one to say the first part.
5/5 - Report As Spam
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