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shes dead.
frozen beneath the darkened sky
there she remains, forever she lies.
maroon stained her face like tears
her eyes stuck open,as though from fear.
por quoi?
black and white circle lies on her chest
a medallion cursed like all the rest
filled with false hopes and broken dreams
the gloomy sky darkens to complete the scene
and time goes on.
people walk around, they don't care
they know they see her laying there
they just keep on walking, living their lives
not caring whether she lives or dies
domage...
her face is cold, eyes glossed to white
they wished she listened, she knew they were right
all she caused was trouble, by telling her lies
but all that's left are silent cries.
she withers.
kneeling by her body, he allows her eyes to rest
who would've thought she should have known this best?
he grasps her hand, and whispers goodbye
despite the sorrow i felt i can no longer cry
au revoir...
my face grows cold as he lays her body to rest
i noticed her arm bore a very familiar crest.
a "J" same as i... how oddly familiar this situation seems be
it was then i realized... the girl who died was me...
- by Kira_Saikosai |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/06/2009 |
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- Title: frozen child
- Artist: Kira_Saikosai
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Description:
a poem based off of a dream i had before
"jay" is my bfs nickname thus represented via tattoo as "J"
there is a little french
pour quoi - for what
domage- too bad
au revoir- good bye or farewell
the medallion is a yin and yang charm i was wearing when i wrote this - Date: 04/06/2009
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Comments (6 Comments)
- lamefck - 04/25/2011
- Wonderful poem
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- Lord Bubbleygirl - 05/26/2009
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ooo i realy like it!!! 5/5
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- Tasikumi - 04/12/2009
- i love it. you were right it is a lot like my poem, broken doll. 5/5
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- Sunafire - 04/07/2009
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Yeah I love the french too, and the story is nice, it flows well.
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- maydaymouse - 04/06/2009
- It's good, very emotional, the french in here is pretty cool. 5/5
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- Abbiezz - 04/06/2009
- this is very good. i love how you put French in there. i can speak French too.
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