Don't Lose it

• Artist: xxmellymelz09xx
• Description: took me like a few mins to write. if you do not understand the concept then let me explain... this is about one kid, trying to convince their best friend not to commit suicide. they try speaking to them trying to get em to listen and think. think about what they hav ahead in life and to believe that there IS a reason to be here in this world. that they must save themselve and dont lose their life to be able to get through to the true meaning of happiness...
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: dont lose

"If I can't tell you now
then when will it be?
Can you please speak your mind?
Can you say it assuredly?

Look
Life is a pain
Few things come
but never go
Yes
We're here for reasons
Its just you
who may not kno

Never say that you just CAN'T
Please DON'T tell me there's no point
because these words will help you not
all they'll do is disappoint

Listen to the words I tell you now
Untie the rope
Put down the knife
because you'll lose it all
and never know
how it feels to save a life..."

Comments

[sycophant paradox]

Nice! Suicidal though. xD

[Daddy Got This Account]

great job! my gosh, it took my breath away the whole time i was reading it! i really like the ending, for me, the ending just, flows with the whole poem. but my fave. stanza would be: Never say that you just CAN'T
Please DON'T tell me there's no point
because these words will help you not
all they'll do is disappoint" i really like it, its so true. ^^ 5/5

[290DarkStars]

HaHa... lolz... the Frey..hmm.... Great poem... I think that it well contrasts the point ... and in a stylish way too wink

[Halfbloodeds_Skeleton]

wow..nice poem =] very deep

[xxmellymelz09xx]

oh and if u waned to kno. my inspiration 4 writing this its well.... the stuff ive been through, my friends on gaia thet i luuuv ^-^,and of coarse.. *bum bum bum* listening to The Fray!!! yay lol