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Another thin red line
Pushed against my bruised flesh
Deeper and deeper it digs into me
Tightening my skin
Blood of agony
Ghosts of my past haunt my inner circle
They creep over me branding me with their mark
The wire burning my flesh
It's a fair judge that cursed me
Unable to see compassion for the wicked
Darkness turns dark red
My head swaying looking at the thin red line
- Title: Black Monday
- Artist: saiyan2k1
- Description: the emotional poem for me. i wrote it during a time where a person i really wanted to know better didn't speak to me anymore.
- Date: 04/05/2009
- Tags: black monday
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Harleen Francis Quinzel - 07/10/2009
- thts sad...really good....but sad
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- Sorari - 06/18/2009
- 5/5 no question there! That gave me shivers! lol
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- Zira361 - 05/02/2009
- Damn. That's good. That's really good! 5/5 all the way. ^^
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- Crulii3 - 04/19/2009
- wow, that's so deep...
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- NakedJack - 04/08/2009
- The stock market crash of 1987
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