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Theres a storm over my head,
I've never been so depressed,
the stone that pumps blood is suddenly beating faster.
Does it matter?
Do you care?
I'm scared...
Suddenly my life is flashing before my eyes,
please...hear my cry.
Why am I cursed?
forced to realize,
life will only get worse.
My guilt is the curve,
that has turned my life into something horrible,
hard to control,
Just please liberate my soul?
- by Hot pink Killer07 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/03/2009 |
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- Title: Suicide Has Control
- Artist: Hot pink Killer07
- Description: I'm Depressed...
- Date: 04/03/2009
- Tags: suicide control
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Comments (3 Comments)
- DeCrazySheep - 04/05/2009
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Again with the smiely face! D:<
....
that aside I like this one.
The first stanza is gripping. Your analogy for the hear was simple and strikeing. 'I'm scared' at the end is peirceing because it doesn't specify what.
wonderful. 5/5
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- Ms Make Me Smile - 04/04/2009
- i love it and i know what its like. im sorry
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- vanessa_m - 04/03/2009
- i like this one....i like the second stanza the best
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