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i still stand here, waiting for you
in the darkness, your not coming are you?
i still wait for hours on end
the sun rises, my only friend
people walk by, they dont notice me at all
i am invisible, i sit down in a ball.
there you are! you were coming this way!
but you just passed by me, there goes another day.
the sun sets, goodbye my friend
i am a ghost, stuck there, hours on end.
i am the sadest ever, but i dont shed a tear,
i dont have any, i then dissapear.
- by Luna Deslumbrado |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/03/2009 |
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- Title: Invisible Love
- Artist: Luna Deslumbrado
- Description: this is a story about a girl who died so she is a ghost, she died in a street and she chose to stay there, so she cant move. she waits for the person she lobes but he cant see her. but then she manages to go because she was so sad.
- Date: 04/03/2009
- Tags: ghostloveinvisiblesadcry
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Luna Deslumbrado - 05/10/2009
- thnxs ^^
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- hotallstar22 - 05/10/2009
- wow i am speechless... that was so depressing....5/5 it was really good
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- -Aesthetix - 05/10/2009
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Wow (:
I really liked that. It's so simple, yet mystifying.
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