Pride

• Artist: Universal-Path
• Description: I want all of my poetry to teach a lesson. Open up the mind. So this lesson I give you now.
  
  Fighting for pride is fighting in ignorance. Pride is nothing more than thinking great of oneself. Nothing but words.
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: pride

Bones are going to be broken,
And eyes will be black and swollen.
Fighting for the things you're holding,
Believing your beliefs are golden.
How you'd never sell your soul, and,
The web of life you're molding.
To reach the afterlife takes a single token,
How hath yours been stolen?
Listen now, the crows are calling,
And your atrocities will leave you sprawling.
All of your beliefs are falling,
Foolish ideals of pride are pulsing.
Open your eyes and mind, fledgling.
Before you die a foolish man's death. Appalling.

Comments

[Calm Seduction]

WOW. that was amazing. Your an exellent writer and you should get published. a modern day edgar allen poe

[NymphetaminePrincess]

this is such a freakn awsome poem!! 5/5!!!!!