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You bleed so erratically, but smoothly
Like the words, so fluent, that leave your mouth as a hiss
Your foe, your former love, pushing the blade ever further into your neck
Slicing your skin neatly with it's sharp side
Your cut unsullied, bleeding wildly
Your words becoming less of a hiss, a whisper
Your last words far from a hallmark moment, vulgar, with anger
With the anger comes the other emotons
The confusion, the pain and the panick
And the hurt
Oh, the hurt
Of your loved one, whom you thought made everything flourish
Killing you
Bringing your life to a sad, sadistic halt
Remembering your lonely state before
Before your trusted this fellow
Before, when you trusted no one
You cry tears
These tears now mixing with your blood, soaking your upper garmet with pink
Leaving you damp, soon to be dead
You, now lieing there, wishing you had never fallen in love
Wishing you had never trusted
And then comes the end
Your breath speeding up erratically
Then stopping abruptly, along with your heart beat
- Title: Betrayed
- Artist: Raypg
- Description: Be wary when it comes to giving away your trust.
- Date: 03/31/2009
- Tags: betrayed
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MelroseHime3316 - 05/21/2010
- wow, this poem is amazing, it reflects on wat u've been thru......i've experienced a lot about things like this too......wow, i rate it a 5, and i favorited it, smile
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