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He lifts his hand and hits my face,
my home I live in is no longer safe.
He yanks my arms and pulls my hair,
he clearly shows that he doesn't care.
He strips me down so that I am bare,
he ties me up, then sits and stares.
He picks up a dagger and walks toward me slowly as can be,
it's obvious that he can see all the fear that I have inside of me.
He cuts my body and then my throat,
I begin to cough and choke.
Once I am dead, he leaves to find
another victim from his mind.
- by Loose Intestinz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/30/2009 |
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- Title: A Murder
- Artist: Loose Intestinz
- Description: It's kind of creepy..But I wrote it a long time ago..enjoy
- Date: 03/30/2009
- Tags: murder
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Comments (5 Comments)
- fireshadowkatdemon - 11/11/2011
- It makes the reader feel scared and in the victim's shoes. It's good.
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- emopiniata - 04/05/2009
- creepy descriptive and captivating truley amazing
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- Loose Intestinz - 03/31/2009
- a sick killer..i guess it could be both i dunno
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- Cl3v3rRey - 03/31/2009
- An Abusive Boyfriend? Or A Sick Killer?
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- vanessa_m - 03/30/2009
- i like it
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