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You walked past me down the street, and it hit me like a bullet to the heart,
You walked with the grace of an angel, your hair shone like the stars at midnight, your eyes the blue of the sky...
I looked for you everywhere after that, then you came to the place I worked,
Itolled my feelings to you, and you smiled at me, your lips the red of roses,
You said you loved me, that you couldnt get me off your mind
Now I know that it was a joke to you, that you wanted me to be your joke 'boyfriend' that you made a bet with your friends that youd go out with me, I see how it is,
I go up to you, and I say how I feel now, now that I know your heart is black and cold as the Lord of Death, that you didnt care for me, you used me, That its over, no more of this game....
Im at the cliff I would go to when I needed to think, you drove me to this point, where I decide if its worth living for, When Ive been toyed with....You twisted my heart, you stapped it with your knife, you ripped it out and you savored my pain...Its time to make you pay for the hurt youve given me

- Title: We loved, then we lost
- Artist: Demonio69
- Description: I checked my poems in the arena and wahtda know, someone asked me to right one about falling in then out of love! So, here it goes, hope it meets there standerds *crosses fingers*
- Date: 03/24/2009
- Tags: loved then lost
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Demonio69 - 05/13/2009
- No I havent...sigh..Idk when Im able to cause I gotta get my tower fixed, I have a labtop I can use but I have to but it up around 9
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- darksangel34 - 05/10/2009
- this is still my favorite... hey...have you written more in the angels and love yet?
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- lilvane13 - 04/28/2009
- kool poem! i like it!and awww! lol <3 always
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- Demonio69 - 03/31/2009
- Try reading Angels and Love in my journal, darksangel says its good but Im not sure. Im not good with storys
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- Buttercup Veela - 03/30/2009
- That was amazingly fantastic. nice sntence fluency, it just flows. the overall effect is spectacular!
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- Demonio69 - 03/25/2009
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Alright, alright ^^, cant write alot in the arena tho, Im saving for the Order of Alantis
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- darksangel34 - 03/25/2009
- thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!! only one thing that caused my surprise!!! your description of this "angel" is just like me!!!!! i have blond hair and bright blue eyes! no lie!!! i love it!!! right more!!! 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5
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