Hate's Running

• Artist: Synayo
• Description: I have this poem on both my accounts o.-
  I wrote this poem for a lot of reasons, it was complicated...
  I still get sort of distressed thinking of it.. Dx
  Im in a much better situation now, by the way ^~^!
  
  Please please PLEASE IT'S NOT SO HARD just comment. A lot of people rate my stuff, but NO COMMENTS so I have no idea what they disliked.
  SO PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!
• Date: 03/22/2009
• Tags: hates running angry

Im running quickly,
Running fast,
Just running, running away,

Im running from all my fear,
Running from your lies in every way,
Because I don't want to hear,
Them everyday,

I wish that somehow,
I cold go back in time,
But, the fact is what's happening now,
Is really not sublime,

I hate how I loved you, dear,
Hate how I wanted you,
I hate how I needed you near,
Hate how I cherished every moment like stupid people do,

So, Im running from my hate,
Running from my love,
Running from all those times, when it was only for you that I would wait,
Running from all those times my life has been "Push-And-Shove."

So let me make this clear,
I hate you, Hate,
And don't you dare go "Now, Dear..."
Because Ill make sure for death, you aren't late.

Comments

[Brinioo]

I didn't read all of it but I like the way you write.

[taurusgirl125]

its pretty good
5/5

[XxKawaiiCurryReitaLoverxX]

That is great.
I liked it.
^^