Empty Walls

• Artist: KittyWaffles-of Do0o0oM-
• Description: just a random poem i wrote
• Date: 03/19/2009
• Tags: empty walls lost alone

Empty walls
The solitude so great
I feel you within me
But the loneliness is too great to over come
In a land full of empty walls
Will I never know your true happiness again?
Am I forever trapped within the labyrinth of the forgotten?
As days pass endlessly without thought
I wonder seeking my escape
For one day- I’ll be free to take you in my arms
Just one day- I will see you shine once again
Alas! Till that day I shall see a way out
To be free from the labyrinth of empty walls

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

I loved you yesterday before you killed my family~
sorry, you got the song stuck in my head. Anyway, it's a bit emo, teenage angsty.

[Sunafire]

I like this poem, it's very meaningful with some nice lines, like the labyrinth part.
It just seems a tad lifeless to me. I don't know what it is, perhaps it needs a bit more structure?

[shannonbookworm14]

I can relate.