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I wish I could hear
The wandering mind,
To decipher between the
Reals and the Fakers.
But all I can hear
Is silence.
I wish I could be oblivious
To everyone and everything,
To escape my worries
And relieve my stress.
But I am like a towering wall
Right in front of them.
I wish I could dance with
The indecisive wind,
To be free and let
Life carry me.
But I am as heavy as a
Meteor crashing down to Earth.
I wish I could,
But I'm just me.
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- Title: I Wish I Could, But...
- Artist: Vahlre
- Description: This is one of the two peoms i sumitted in a contest at my school. The other one is sumitted here too. I want your honest opinions. But if your going to be negative at least tell me why. Thanks!!!
- Date: 03/19/2009
- Tags: wishbut
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Manga Matturz - 05/30/2009
- -agrees to jazzy-
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- The only Jazzy - 03/19/2009
- Great poem! I can relate to it.
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