Patchwork/Centos

• Artist: OoXSaraMonsterXoO
• Description: I had to write this poem about 3 years ago. Basically what it is, is we had to take random lines we heard or read in different places, and make them into a poem. thats why it may not make a whole lot of sense. ^_^ comment and rate fairly, thanks!
• Date: 03/19/2009
• Tags: patchwork centos

Suddenly ghosts walked,
They all hiss as they glide.
I am going home now,
And the bus is only ten cents.
So many of us,
When mice with wings can wear a human face.
I am amazed at your passionate words,
Let her not hurt me.
With his great hands full of fire,
Christ save us all from a death like this.

Comments

[Wilted Bloody Rose]

I really like it biggrin 5/5

[max_8814]

the poem is designed to make you infer and think constructively so you the individual give it meening. Its not going to have any meening what so ever unless the poet delibrately chose those lines.

[OoXSaraMonsterXoO]

-__- its not supposed to make sense.. read the description.

[FuriazFTW]

Uhh...

I really don't get it. If it made sense, I'd rate it, but as is... I can't rate it.

[princessangel998]

.....okay...