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I see the look from the face that smiles no more
She stabs my chest, and shoves me out the door
I lye here dying, sinking into arms that are cold and soar.
She rips my heart out of my chest,
and leaves me here to bleed to death.
She was sorry,
but was too late to catch me.
holding my limp body,
she just let me be.
"let me die" I say to her,
"A world with you is one of cruelty and doom."
She cries on my face, and smiles a little,
and asks me "What's with the gloom?"
I could only stare,
I still loved her and she knew.
She looked down at me and asked,
"Can we not become new?"
"We can be happy again,
we can have a son!"
I faced her,
eyes full of tears, for she had won.
She kisses me once more upon my head,
and looked back down, I was dead.
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/15/2009 |
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- Title: What She Did.
- Artist: 290DarkStars
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Description:
Ok, This never happened to me...
But I usually try yo plan out my life...resulting in numerus dissapointing simulatons, usually resulting imn me dying without love.... I wrote a poem on one imparticular mental simulation, It ended in poetic way, so that why I wrote a poem about it.
( after planning and planning, I realised that I am not to plan but rather to pray and let God chart my trip)
- Date: 03/15/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Daddy Got This Account - 05/04/2009
- aww... so sad... i cried once again at your great poetic ways! :bows: ^^ lol. 5/5
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- Buttercup Veela - 03/21/2009
- OH WOW. . . u r a VERY poetic person.
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- master tygon - 03/17/2009
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Very depp 5/5...read mine you will be left with questions...
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101199211#title - Report As Spam
- Paper Crane Kiko - 03/16/2009
- interesting..........
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- Silently_Die_By_You - 03/16/2009
- whoa, i mean WHOA. now THAT had some meaning for once!
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