Waterfalls of Sorrow

• Artist: Ace Edmonds PD
• Description: Written at a time for a friend who went through a very rough break up.
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: waterfalls sorrow

They cascade down
Waterfalls of sorrow
And the melancholy frown
Will still be there in the morrow
These waters of pain
That we all have inside
They give away what we are trying to hide
We want to be strong, and show that we are
But such a facade can only go so far
The intense suffering we can feel all around
Make the waters flow onward, down

Comments

[Goyiafa6666]

it flows well, but its not brilliant. also im a bit tired of reading so many negetive poetry