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she walks among the people
not noticing that they dont see her
for she knows why
and,
she accepts it
if only she had been faster,
this wouldnt have happened
she knows that
she refuses to go
only her friends can see her
they dont want her to go
but they know that she has to
she hugs each twice
and tells them that,
she will wiat for them untill their time comes.
and then, she gose
fades out of sight
two years go by,
then another two,
then another,
finaly,
it was time,
she faded into veiw
once again
only her freinds can see her
she huged them
and when the girl next to her said her good byes
they faided out of sight,
with tears in their eyes
standing between their freinds
and
the coffin.
Oniko Black

- Title: The Coffin
- Artist: oniko17
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Description:
ok.... sooooo.... i was really deperessed when i wrote this and I CANNOT WRITE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am terrably sorry... but this isnt as bad not THAT depressing so it should be ok..... i think.... im not shur but..... enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!! >///<
P.S.
sorry for the bad spelling!!! - Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: coffin
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dark Rose Bella - 05/19/2010
- This is very good somewhat like what i write you should check my poems out
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- kitten725 - 06/30/2009
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suicide is something that happens in real life
i can understand it
one of my friends are thinking about it
so tetsudai this isn't crap it's life
are you living in some fantasy world - Report As Spam
- Tetsudai - 03/17/2009
- This is very, very bad. I honestly hope you never write another piece of god awful crap like this for as long as either one of us lives. Give up, forever.
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