the broken promise

• Artist: Oxy-Nota
• Description: i wrote this about a promise almost every guy i meet breaks and it always ends up differently this is the most resent.
• Date: 03/11/2009
• Tags: broken promise

You promised you would love me......
at least untill you died.......
So, why am i alone......
and dying inside.....

If you were here...
I'd be holding you tight.......
but your with her.........
and thats not right..........

They wonder why i'm crazy.....
they wonder why i cry.......
All that i can wonder is.......
why did you leave me here to die???

I miss those words..........
that you once said......
Now i sit.........
with a gun to my head....

Comments

[ToxicMareeRiver]

wow... dark.... hm... shes scary...

[Oxy-Nota]

i loved this poem and oxys an idiot.....
it was about a boy named edwend and her so ya...


Love
Zelphia!!

[ruroukenluver13]

ive never had a bf but if he said tht i would inform him of its actual meaning and tell him tht i wont cry wen we break up because if he says tht its sortof natural to believe ull breakup . . . unless ur married

[vanessa_m]

i like it, makes me want to cry. even i once thought that was the way , for me to no longer stay. 5/5

[iXiKAoRu-LufFeRx]

i like it though..its beatiful :]

[Oxy-Nota]

don't listen to me this is NOT the way to deal i know now that it's easyer to remain single then to let someone break your heart.....
i think Zelphia wrote this not me....