Mysterious Girl

• Artist: DarkwindD23
• Description: I am doin this to see how good people think it is. I hope it's good. :)
• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: mysterious girl

Mysterious girl, Mysterious girl
All of a sudden you came in my world
Rose are red, Violents are blue
I was wonderen if you can give me a clue
What are you like, sour or sweet
Do you listen to the lyrics, or to the beat

When I last saw you, even though it was just a second
You where lookin all cute, and that smile is just perfection
The mysterious girl is lookin like a star
I wanna get to know her, but the distance is too far
I wonder if she knows, or care I exist
I just wish I knew the name after miss

I should just tell her, but what would she say
I have to think quick, I must do this today
Waiting any longer would tear me apart
But if I go wrong, I'll break my own heart
Tension, desire, and the weight of the world
Is all I feel when I think about the mysterious girl

Comments

[guess beaniewatson]

I really like it. I agree with the first comment whole heartedly. The way it weaves in and out of the rhymes...I love it. 4/5

[Thorn Of The Sky]

This was really awesome!Its nice how it just weaves in and out of rhymes and I love it!