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The darkness has eaten me, pure black around me,
where am i?! black, Black, BLACK! everywhere!
Screeches of pain, agony, of the dead, crying out for revenge
THE CRIES!!! THEY RING IN MY EARS!!! SUCH MISERY!!!! I CANNOT TAKE IT!!!
My body trembles in the frozen embrace of my end,
FREEZING! I'M SO COLD! WHAT IS THIS?! WHY, WHY DO I FEEL LIKE DEATH IS NEAR?!
the taste of blood festers in my mouth,
BLARGH! MY MOUTH IS FILLED WITH FOULNESS! THE TASTE IS HORRID!!!
the smell of rotting carcasses fill my nostrils
THIS SMELL, ITS SO DISGUSTING! SO MUCH WRENCH!
My thoughts twirl in my head, a tornado of pure insanity, the madness cannot be controlled,
THE CHAOS THE CHAOS THE CHAOS!!!! I'M GOING INSANE!!!!
My actions can no longer be controlled, my body viciously shakes, arms tear at the air around me,
AARGH!! NO NO NO!!! LET ME FREE LET ME FREE!!! LET ME OUT OF THIS HELL!!!
Tears of blood roll down my cheeks,
PLEASE! FREE ME!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!!
LET US FREE!!
LET US FREE!!!
A flash of white justice,
What was that?
My heart stops, i clench it with anguish,
AAAAAAAAARGH! MY HEART, MY HEART!
my body is going numb,
i.... can't feel anything....
i see a white blurred figure walk toward me,
what..... is..... that....?
It gets closer and closer,
who..........are.......you........
it touches me, and as it does it, the white fades away and it becomes more clear,
An......... Angel?
the pain leaves me, and millions of the white figure appears, the black, the cries, the cold, the taste, and the smell all fade away, i am in a new world, full of beautiful gardens with flowers made of gold and jewels, yet still living, with a smell of blooming roses, the sound of calming sirens, i feel lightened, everything i touch so warm and full of life, the taste of wine seems to fill my lips, my mind is calm and free of confusion, and my body tamed,
Where am i?
Are we Finally....... Free?
Are we Finally....... Free?
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- Title: My Madness, Our Madness
- Artist: 3rchaos
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Description:
Welcome to my world of Double ego's. ever thought what would be like if someone answered you back when you talked to yourself in your mind? believe me its hell.
Well anyway, this is a poem i wrote, enjoy ^.^ - Date: 03/05/2009
- Tags: colorcyanpoem gothic
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ColdxLunarsxXxRemorse - 05/22/2009
- this is a good poem. it truely shows what it's like to have split personalities....it's hard to deal with them sometimes.....also it would make a good song. everything in blakc sang by one at the same time as anothing singing the red lines just make it a bit longer and i might be able to talk my band into making a song of it and posting the mp3 on here... and i will only give the link to anyone who pays and half or any ammount of the money will go to you. sound good?
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- 3rchaos - 03/08/2009
- What this poem truly means, it is for you to find, for my words is just dust in the wind, only you can determine its Reality, or Insanity.
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- Silently_Die_By_You - 03/06/2009
- whoa, wat happened here?? did u just die?
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