Why

• Artist: iButtonz
• Description: i spaced em out so its easier to read,
  my poem/lyrics its my song i play on the keyboard., i wrote it
• Date: 03/01/2009
• Tags: love alone

well here i go

running in this empty road

and no one will ever know

that never again can i return home

and in the end here i am

sitting alone in a world of darkness

with scars all over my hands

never knew love could bring this

ive tried so hard not to let life go

but the more i try the more they show

my scars...my tears...show pain

ive ran too far, with these fears..nothing remains

with memories in my mind of you

treasuring these things we use to do

when you left it left a mark

and everytime i cried, it tallied my heart

and scream no...

please dont go....

but with the winds of razors

leaving me stunned like tazors

gave me no choice to let go and close my eyes

leaving me with my own thoughts why

Comments

[Shrouded Nightmares]

I actually like this a lot. One of the best I'm probably reviewing. It really captures the relationship break up good. I have an idea for you. You should also add into this how the girl or boy feels when they broke up with the other, such as (He (she) goes on day by day living live, sadness delayed) Something like that or how he had trouble breaking up with the other.