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Snowhite has passed
Onto a new day's fail
The crescent flakes have died
From their cremation, the life begins again
Sunset, Sunrise
Lilies replace pastures of snow replace lilies replace pastures of snow replace lilies
To the snow that encases itself under it's own weight, hardening each layer, so cold, and unnaturally calm
To the growth that the sun's love inspires, with grace and life to all around, love for the leaves that brides the trees, naturally extending it's arms, but untouchable for fire is it's passion
Can the two truly love when one will hurt the other?
- by WereSquishy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/26/2009 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Mutandanstan - 06/05/2009
- Kind of, but its really just this 'Lilies replace pastures of snow replace lilies replace pastures of snow replace lilies' line is all^^
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- WereSquishy - 06/04/2009
- I think I repeat too many lines in my poems afterwards... like references towards stuff. But taunk yew.
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- Mutandanstan - 06/04/2009
- I like the second line 'Onto a new day's fail' because it adds emotion to the piece with the word 'fail' and 'new day'. I also like how you put 'From their cremation, the life begins again' reminds me of a phoenix how only from their ashes they are reborn. Good jobums!
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- WereSquishy - 03/04/2009
- The hell that suppose to mean?
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- Emmaztiger - 03/04/2009
- okie dokie goody goody jobby wobby!!
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- WereSquishy - 02/27/2009
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