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star, the star in the sky
how you shine, shine so bright
you stand out, yet blend in
with your fellow glowing brethren
I speak out to you, not because of your light
I cry out, looking for my sight
am I right in choosing you?
Or am I mistaken, and your radiance I should eschew?
These too long days shorten your plight
The sun's glare keep you at bay till night
and yet not even time can stop your light
Your labeled as eternity, in my eyes

- Title: stars oh stars
- Artist: ABluejay
- Description: yet another cosmic related poem. kill me
- Date: 02/23/2009
- Tags: stars stars
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- Girouette - 03/11/2009
- cosmic is a good subject, its one we can all relate to, but you should keep a steady vocab in your works
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