the girl

• Artist: Little Miss Zy
• Description: my sad life. true story about me
• Date: 02/21/2009
• Tags: girl

the girl thats so unpopular
the girl everyone dares
the girl who cries her heart out
because no one cares

the girl who has no friends
the girl who wants something more
the girl who wishes they would stop
hurting her heart down to the core

the girl who is weird
the girl who made a choice
the girl who is made fun of
and dosent have a voice

you dont know how it feels
to be that sad, hurt girl
and guess what? heres deal
thats me. for real

Comments

[DRE DAY 720]

i feel so sorry for you.i used to feel that way ,but i found a common ground .im so sorry. sad sad sad sad sad sad

[jgirl39]

I second meerodi - it's so sad! And very, very, real.
Two suggestions - I understand the repetition, but "girl" is just about the only noun in the whole poem.
Also, try using internal rhymes.

[meerodi]

ohh! I'm sorry!!! This poem is so sad crying I've read a lot of realy sad poems on gaia, but this one's really good because it's relatible