pain

• Artist: wallerrob
• Description: i was angry at eople and this came to me in a dream, it isn't very good but i was asleep
• Date: 02/20/2009
• Tags: pain

angry at the world, nothing can stop the pain,
i feel it coming and there is nothing to gain,
mom, dad, sister, friends,
when will it ever end,
what is this feeling,
when will it end??

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Ugh. More uncreative and unoriginal poetry. So plain and simplistic. Weak structure, and harmful to read.