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Have been to the dessert under that hot fiery sun?
Not exactly what I prefer time killing fun
But during that time you struggle to survive
ten thousand children just gave up on life!
This is just the poet's pen
always giving away words to lend
but this time I have to give more than just my life
to help prolong our wretched demise!
And do it with a poetic rhyme!
Have been underground in the septic sewers below?
submiting time after time to self pity and woe?
well during that time you cry time after time
another dozen thousands fell under a long painful demise!
this is just another mexican
always wasting his life with the same inky blue pen
but even I stepped out to raise my voice
not letting the pig headed leaders lie about my choice!
and done it before I'm out of time
- Title: Time and life
- Artist: ABluejay
- Description: The title is that cuz those are the two words I inevitably use the most
- Date: 02/19/2009
- Tags: time life
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- Girouette - 03/11/2009
- your poem had a nice meter going, but it fell apart at the end, a simple change in word choice can do it though
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