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When I found you,
I found myself
I found a guy
Like no one else.
When I found you,
I found my heart
I found it struck
By Cupid's dart.
When I found you,
I found pure bliss
I found heaven
Deep within your kiss
When I found you,
I found my soul
I found your love
That made me whole
When I found you,
I found my dreams
I found out what
Your love really means
When I found you,
I found a lot
I found true love.
- by Never The End |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/18/2009 |
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- Title: When I Found You.
- Artist: Never The End
- Description: Explains For Itself.
- Date: 02/18/2009
- Tags: found
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Comments (7 Comments)
- pucca_995 - 06/02/2010
- this is cute
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- TheKhamaseen - 05/24/2009
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this is the best thing i've read on the poetry arena-
just please, don't say 'guy' and 'cupid's dart'... eh, maybe not
well when i go back for specifics you have lots of cliches...
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- ThatsWhatiiSaid - 05/23/2009
- omg, that is the best poem ive read in a while...thats also the first happy poem ive read in a longggggg time
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- UC Poika - 05/23/2009
- Shorter no caps on every word. I like that too.
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- Never The End - 02/23/2009
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Thanks you guys.
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- Vilessie - 02/20/2009
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Gushy Gush
[That means Goody Good]
I do kinda agree with Kibroth
But as poetry is
what the heart says
so your words are your emotions
^.^
:3
------Vivia [ Vilessie]
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- Kibroth - 02/19/2009
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Very well written.
Suggestion(s): Perhaps add "I've not forgot" or something similar as a 4th line to the last tanza.
4/5,
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