Lonely

• Artist: Kashloggi Jones
• Description: Another Emo/punk song about myself
• Date: 02/14/2009
• Tags: raven

I don't want to be her
the girl in the corner
I wish that she wasn't me
I want to be that girl
dancing in the limelight
but she's just a little uptight

Oh why
I live like this now
I don't know how
I got like this
Poisonous from your kiss
I feel alive
but I'm not ready to take that dive

I see her face in the dark
when she walks through the park
I wish I weren't her
that girl on the edge
I want to be that other girl
standing on the platform
her heart isn't torn

Oh why
This is me now
I don't know how
I used to be
like her you see
then my world fell
I hurled down and through hell

Because of you
I can't be like her again
you turned me against myself
I lay crying in the rain
you looked back at me
and you promised to
'always be there to see
my face in the morning light'
you got down on your knee
th ring was a sight

I stood at the altar
while hours passed
I ran from the church
it didn't last
I thought I was yours
obviously not
I fell to the floor
and with my final breath

I shrieked
'Lonely! forever
lonely whenever'
you broke my heart
lonely forever
no longer 'til death do we part.

Comments

[Kashloggi Jones]

trust me, I was tired and had no idea what I was writing. My other songs tend to be stronger and more powerful. Remind me to tell Jenny to... zzzz

[awesome dragonslayer]

its ok it could be better or worse look up my sisters pem her name is angry dragonriser

[catObSeSsIoN]

I Agree. Your beginning was a bit confusing and your ending was great. If you made your beginning as streong as your end, then you'd have a great song there!~ ^w^

[Saga_Divine]

Just Dang...you have a really strong ending but if I were you I would try to make the beginning as strong as your ending.

[Saga_Divine]

Just Dang...you have a really strong ending but if I were you I would try to make the beginning as strong as your ending.

[Kashloggi Jones]

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