All She Wanted

• Artist: Xxhidden_wingsxX
• Description: a sad poem about a little girl who just wanted somebody to love her
• Date: 02/11/2009
• Tags: wanted girl love

All she wanted was a home
so she didn't have to feel so alone.
All she wanted was to cry
let go of all of her pain and die.
All she wanted was some happiness
just to let go and go on in bliss.
All she wanted was a friend
someone to help her with those stitches she could not mend.
All she wanted was some hope
which she only dreamed about in books she wrote.
All she wanted was a mom
even though she knew she was long gone.
All she wanted was a dad
someone who never got really mad.
All she wanted was some reassurance
cause she had nowhere where she could learn it.
All she wanted was to scream
and make herself cry and bleed.
All she wanted was a family
so she could be like all the other kids and laugh happily.
All she wanted was some music
so she could dance and try just to screw it.
All she wanted was some love
just someone who she could kiss and hug.
And all she wanted was to be free
and know for once that she could dream. heart

Comments

[Azzadar]

I love it!
But i did spot one problem. Its not really a problem, just something that caught my eye. In the 8th line, it seems to me that there are too many syllables. It didn't really sound right to me. Maybe instead of stitches, you could have put wounds?
But overall, absolutely fantastic. 5/5

[Kamen King]

i love it