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My heart, it aches, when I think of you,
others compare but they have no clue,
it hurts when others think i lie,
because there not there to see me cry.
I'm hidden behind a wall you can't see,
a place where no one would want to be,
trapped inside these thick brick walls,
whose to save? when i'm the one that falls.
No daddy, no friends, no one to care,
the fire inside me is barely there,
no comfort, just hurt, I hide inside,
just need someone thats by my side.
Need to escape the darkness of night,
and someone to save me from this endless fight,
then here he comes out of the light,
and comes to hold me with all his might.
and then i'm secure with his warm embrace,
as his hands move up and touch my face,
fall asleep inside his arms,
no longer shall I hear alarms.
nothing to wake me up from this sleep,
for it is "us" i want to keep,
hold onto you tight and never let go,
I'll love you forever is what i want you to know.

- Title: Forever
- Artist: puhlayed
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Description:
At the beginning it explains how i feel about after the death of my cousin and how i recieve no help to get through this pain. Then it says how my boyfriend comes to save me blah blah blah descriptions are not my thing really. its not perfect but its one of my newest ones. And i see some mistakes im just not really a grammer person lol.
If you didn't read my earlier poems then you'd probably get confuse at the beginning thinking im talking about my boyfriend or something lol. - Date: 02/11/2009
- Tags: forever
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ll Tears of Joy ll - 02/11/2009
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I love this poem
Its great
Your rhyming is perfect
And i found no grammar mistakes
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