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If I could knock the bird from the sky
Watch it fall and hear it's cry
Never will I knock that bird
From the heavens above for it'd be absurd
Knock thine bird from the heaven nay will I
For I shan't ever cease to hear the pained cry
To harm the innocent wings would register sin
For innocence again is not abundant to human kin
That bird represents my angel
My angel turned out to be
My malicious notorious devil
As much as I want not to believe
For now you know why
I shan't kill that angel
That winged creature
That I professed love
Nowadays I see that bird in the sky
Flying next to another, the winged doves
I hold on to the rock ready to be thrown
But I will not launch it and you will know why...
- by x_V-Ghost-V_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/07/2009 |
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- Title: Bird...
- Artist: x_V-Ghost-V_x
- Description: Metaphorically Yours
- Date: 02/07/2009
- Tags: bird
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Comments (4 Comments)
- momo the momi - 02/10/2009
- So far, this one's my favorite! And sorry it took me so long to read these ^^
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- Sakura no Akuma - 02/10/2009
- Hm...it seems pretty good, the only thing that bothers me is lack of rhythm with the amount of syllables in each line and stanza...the writing itself though, very good. ^^ 4/5
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- scitama - 02/08/2009
- The last paragraph explained it all to me. I can understand not hurting the bird, for someday, maybe it will fly back to you...?
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- Rena Hyuga - 02/07/2009
- just sooooo much interpretation needed... but once u get it, it is a beautiful piece... 100/5
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